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Saturday, November 20, 2010

TBC: Proj 1 Public Critique

Yes my latest post is about school, i need your help! Want to get your opinions and critique for my Time-Based Communications project.

Video features different visuals and sounds that are suppose to convey a certain concept.









You can comment the two videos based on these questions:
• What is the concept?
• How do visual/aural elements, the structure and pacing work to support the concept?
• Anything you find unanswered or confusing?
• What are this project’s greatest strengths?


Thanks a Lot guys!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I think the concept is trying to portray stress and traffic in one's mind but a way for you to overcome that is thinking about summer? or a certain place that helps you calm your thoughts.

Definitely the busyness of the first part of the video along with the sounds create that understanding for viewers in terms of the stressful environment. Also, with the way you transition the park scene with the eyes and when you were about to draw shows that you were in a dreaming and subjective state.
The concept was pretty understandable but i was just a bit curious what you were going to draw? Is drawing what you were thinking a way to relieve the stress?
Greatest strengths are definitely the transitioning of the scenes. Really makes us believe that the park, you playing soccer and biking was part of your thoughts.

Just saying =)